I like!
Sounds like that yoruba song "Iwo ko lo da mi, o de n soro bi eledumare; Iwo ko lo da mi" lol


- LDP

iLike it too
Unfortunately, its human nature to judge and then conveniently forget their own somnething, lol

Not a bad one for a trial girl!!!Ok,i hope this isn't coming as a repeat cos i could have sworn i dropped a comment here!!!
I always maintain that there are snaer,calmer n less condemning ways to pass across an opinion. Hence,if anybody's giving you grief, direct him/her my way n i'd sort the billy out for u!

This is really good for a first timer. Very clear message. keep writing.

You're first attempt so there's definitely a long way for you too go and a lot of improvement to do.

I loved the message you passed across..It has a whimsical quality to it.

darling, it sounds like,
"the next time i'll tell you to stop looking at me like that, you'll see what i'll do to you"
jus dont go slapping anyone, just yet
i like the idea so am not gonna judge your 'poetrics'

i add- 'Do not look at me like that' like you know my life or can walk in my shoes, like you can do better and i'm just wasting the space..

me likey, jare..it's so on point!

wassup girl i finally found your blog its interesting

Me likey :)

"Why not let the creator be the judge of me."

I love the simplicity of this "Lara-trying-to-write-a-poem".

You should "try" more o!